So I’m going over the feedback I got from my first screenplay editor (the second is scheduled for the end of this month) for TreasHu and she talks several places about increasing the conflict. I’ve read in a number of …
Category: My Writing
Header category for all the stuff I write.
First draft done
Over our vacation in Orlando (lows in the 60’s, highs in the 80’s; such a nice change from the dreary weather at home), I wrapped up all the scenes I originally envisioned when I wrote the synopsis for Treasure Hunt…
Director’s Statement
My goal with Treasure Hunt is twofold: first: to learn, by doing, how to assemble and manage a team to produce a feature-length film that’s engaging and entertaining. Second, but no less important, to evaluate if making movies is as …
Poetic map
I decided, part way through the design process of the story, to have instructions on finding the treasure hidden in a poem instead of a conventional map with an ‘X’ on it. It sounded like such a great idea, but …
The Sketch that Started it all
Below is the character sketch I produced when I first got excited about the Diary of a Contract Killer concept. At first I intended nothing more than a few notes, but then thought to write it as if the character …
Treasure Hunt Poster and Research
I’ve been working, once again, with Daria Brennan, at http://beegraphica.com/, to develop a poster to give a visual idea of the vibe I’m hoping to go with for the movie. Here’s what she came up with (click on …
Trez You
I usually shorten my titles, I shortened this one to TreasHu and hear it in my mind as Trez You.
“Treasure Hunt” is the name I’ve come up with for my directorial debut. It may also be my …
DoaCK Developmental Editing, Part 3
This is a three-part post regarding the developmental editing I got for my first novel through Steve, the Novel Doctor. Part 1. Part 2.
This is Steve’s reply to my reply. I included excerpts from mine to …
DoaCK Developmental Editing, Part 2
This is a three-part post regarding the developmental editing I got for my first novel through Steve, the Novel Doctor. Part 1. Part 3.
This is my reply to Steve. I included excerpts from Steve’s where I …
DoaCK Developmental Editing
This is a three-part post regarding the developmental editing I got for my first novel through Steve, the Novel Doctor. Part 2. Part 3.
My hope is by reading this you can get some sort of idea …